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Stephen Walker's avatar

Excellent essay. Please allow me to make a small suggestion. If you include at least one photograph in a post, it will give much greater impact when the post is restacked or appears in someone’s news feed. The photo can be set as the main preview for the post. You probably already know this, but didn’t have that in mind when you composed this post a year ago?

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Sobia Quazi's avatar

This was so elegantly written. Hands down one of the best things I've read on here. There's such a subtlety about how you keep circling back through deeper layers of themes, to keep coming back to completion, of the various arcs of meaning - I can't express it, but its such a delicate balancing. It reminded me of a dolphin gliding in circles around the deeps, and arriving near the surface, then gliding downwards in a wider circle and so on. Yes, I know that sounds weird. Anyway, it was excellent how you've covered so many layers of meaning, when it is ostensibly about money lending practices but actually so much more. My question would be, why isn't it submitted to a literary publication, and when is a book coming...?

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